Death OF Dreams

by Cindy   Apr 6, 2008


Used to laugh, used to love
Lost it all the day you died
A blank stare with no words
Lifeless body silenced cry

Skin hard like an ancient oak
Icy cold touching your hand
Look of peace upon your face
Just to much for me to stand

Mind spinning out of control
Emptiness now all I feel
A shell of what use to be
Life has lost all it's appeal

Sitting in this smoke filled room
All alone with thoughts of you
Walls are closing in on me
Everything has come unglued

Used to laugh, used to love
Staring into sparkling eyes
Always thought we'd be one
Till the day this dream died.

Written by: Cynthia Graver April 6, 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    This was written straight from your heart , one of the things that makes your poems so good . As far as poetry goes, the flow was good, did not force the rhyme and content wisw, since I know it is true, it pains my heart to read.......it is so unfair. The poem conveys utter sorrow and was well penned.

  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    This is a great poem.... if you lost someone i am so sorry.... but this is a great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Meaghan

    That was amazing. your passion for writing is so strong. keep up the excellent work. i hope you feel better.
    Meaghan

  • 16 years ago

    by Happy And Lonely

    Damn that was sad, i feel bad that all ive eva done is complain :( but hey good job darl xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    Great poem... makes me sad though. lots of feeling put into it 5/5

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