Submission date : 2008-04-19
Last edit : 2008-04-19
mommys little failure ( F P C D )
Sad, but maybe one day she will fall for you, or unfortunatly it's just not meant to be, but this was good, liked this part alot:
Writing a sad poem
Before you pick your pen
you need an open wound
Broken heart that you can't mend
Another Broken Record ( F P C D )
Jake called me about two minutes before i read this...lovely timing, of course....it's a very sad poem, jesse. and very true towards how i know you feel...and how i feel. great job.
StuckInWaiting ( F C )
Wow, very true poem. excet the part were it said it's not true 4 u, u can't predict the future and u got 2 stop dwelling on the past. just live in the moments! cause that's all u have that u can change. 5/5
This is beautiful.