Submission date : 2008-07-20
Last edit : 2008-07-20
Amber ( F P C D )
Awww wow so sad :[
Andrew ( F P C D )
This poem is really great, its a sad piece thats written brilliantly. I liked it and well i hope her memories stay forever. Brilliant piece.
Sara xNiteoxLamiax ( P C )
This is a very emotional piece of work it has a lot of sadness and pain in every word. The ending was the most astonishing part of the poetry and it made the whole thing mean even more
Waiting4mywings2heal ( F P )
This was good i like it alot 5/5
I love you always and today ( F P C )
That poem is really amazing work and im glad your using your talent and sharing. you have a unique way of writing and I love this poem. It really did touch me and you have a real good way with words you have my vote....keep up the good work!