Submission date : 2009-05-07
iRobbiee ( F C D )
Very creative and different.. I like this poem because its just different.
rose blooming ( F P C D )
Very interesting form. I liked it. The wording was great. I enjoyed reading it. The only change you might make is:
"comealittlecloser." separate the words out.
Other then that it is a great poem.
mello193 ( F P C D )
This was amazing. i like how you made it look to add a such emotion to the lines, you are a brilliant writer, great job ^u^