It's Not Your Fault You Hurt Me

by mikaella   May 14, 2009


Lost myself in this bitterness of life
I lost my morals.
I know I hurt him but he hurt me too
How is it justified?
I know I'll apologize for all that HE does
I know I blame myself

Wasn't good enough,
wasn't ever enough
i lie.
i love him, but i lie
but I'd never do what he did
He hurts me too...

I want to let him go so i don't hurt him anymore
Know i can change
Never mean to hurt him
Never meant to cry
Just so stupid

But I'd never cheat on him
i wouldn't do what he did
I've done more wrong than him
but he hurt me worse...
I poked him with a bunch of needles
he hit me with an Axe

He can't take it back neither
she has apart of him inside her
and he can't take it back

I try not to mess up
I really do, maybe it was me
maybe it was my fault... he did no wrong
it wouldn't be anything new
not really

It was all my fault i never meant to hurt you
and it's not your fault you hurt me
it was never you it was always me

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  • 14 years ago

    by Alyx

    Very nice, I like the way it flows on its own. I think you put alot of yourself into this poem... like I said, very nice.

    Alyx

  • 14 years ago

    by Esther

    I like this poem, beggining and end, it kind of wavers in the middle, and the flow changes, but despite that I still think it is good, if this is real, then i am sorry.

  • 14 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Well it was a personal poem... Though I don't like the title haha. Coz it reminds me of the break up line girls always use to break up with me. "Its not you its me"

    Anyway serious time.

    I think to improve this poem you should focus on the (tenses) coz it can confuse the reader.

    Also I think to improve this you should not use 'I' too much. It can ruin the flow of the poem.

    Another suggestion I have in mind is.
    You should put the poem in stanzas. Structure of a poem is a - plus plus.

    Anyway its up to you really on how you write your poems. In my opinion there is no bad poem - as long as you write from your heart.

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