Forgotten Soul

by She Loves Me She Loves Me Not   Jul 12, 2009


I'm left on my own, alone as can be
Stuck in my memories, please release me
Forever they will haunt me, I struggle on
Until the forgotten soul is dead and gone

Walking through a crowded place
Head down, to hide my disgrace
I'm living a lie through my fake smile
The forgotten soul is no longer worthwhile

Thoughts and feelings flooding my soul
I'm losing my mind, I'm losing control
Alone and forgotten I will be
The forgotten soul will always be me.

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  • 14 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Great write...5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Donna

    You keep writting like that your one soul that will never be forgotten strong pashionate word fronm the heart ..Super work keep it up and good luck for the future love all ive red off your so far
    Donna xx

  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    Really powerful piece. With the soul it seems as though you have died and you're looking down knowing that you are forgotten. Such a deep piece with lots of emotion, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by silvertung69

    I would have to agree with miracle on the line most related to . I have a poem called visious cycle that relates vary well to what your saying. The expression of you pain was vary clear, nice job.

  • 14 years ago

    by miracle

    Wow amazing poem it flowed so well it had rythem it was beautiful. i think the line i can relate the most is this..."I'm living a lie, through my fake smile"
    i love this poem plz...never stop wrighting.
    5/5

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