Submission date : 2009-10-01
Last edit : 2012-02-08
Nice poem... I think it's cute... -.-
Might be hard accepting the end of a relationship but you sometimes can not change anything. Just remember the happy times and remember not only how happy he was, but how happy you were. That happiness you felt you shouldn't hide from another, maybe he will open your eyes and heart again...
Lady Nik ( F P C D )
I liked this. I felt like you told a story that alot of people deal with. I like the simple flow of things and the style is one of my old favorites. This was a well written poem from the heart hun and I enjoyed reading it. Keep it up hun. Nik
nightsan ( F C D )
Awts this is cute and sad poem. I like the simplicity of the poem. There are times we need to let go someone we loved to be strong and to find a right one.