Love, Your Baby Girl...

by Snickerpie

Dear Mom,

You said you'd always be there
But you're nowhere to be found
I can't believe you left me
I feel so low beneath the ground

There's nothing I can do now
I trusted you with all my heart
But now you're gone
You're the one who tore my life apart

I've learned not to trust
There's nothing more to say
You've lost someone special
You can't get back each day

Now you're the one left in the dark
And all of a sudden you feel my pain
You expect me to take you back
But you still feel you're not to blame

I could never forgive you
Even if I tried
You can never make up
For the lonely nights I've cried

You will never know the feeling
Of losing the person you need the most
To laugh and cry and love you
Instead of making you feel like a ghost

I've moved on with my life
Without you by my side
My pain has kept so long
I'm telling you how I feel inside

In a way I want to thank you
Because of you I'm strong
I just wanted you to know
I didn't turn out wrong

 

Submission date : 2011-12-19
Last edit : 2011-12-20

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believeinlove87 ( F P C D ) at 2011-12-20

Wow girl this is amazing<3

Truly from the heart.

In a way I want to thank you
Because of you I'm strong
I just wanted you to know
I didn't turn out wrong
-I love this. Showing her that even though she walked out of your life; You didn't become a bad person.

This is a beautiful touching poem. Show the pain of how bad it hurt you when she left. Then when she realized and felt the pain she caused she wants you to forgive her. Even though shes your mom, the pain she caused was to much for you to even consider forgiving.

Flawless
5/5

Snickerpie ( F P ) at 2011-12-20

Seriously girl, thank you for all your comments...they're so thoughtful, motivating, full of praise & inspiration. i've never met you but, i feel like ive known you forever from all the late night convoc and texts about...well...you know :)

Anyways, thanks for being you :) love you girl :)

believeinlove87 ( F P C D ) at 2011-12-20

I know girl I do too :)

& you're welcome.
Love you too :)

Ill text you tomorrow :)

TJ BECKER Arizona Eagle ( F P C D ) at 2011-12-21

I think I told you once but I'll tell you again. Love the name
I have to say it's nice to see a poem of this kind placed on the nominations. You penned a poem that flows with excellent wording. Good job