I tried...

by Rihanna

I'm trying to not
let you see
how much
you mean to me.

I tried to not
let you in,
but somehow
you just win

I'm trying so hard
to not fall apart
but it's not easy
when I have
a broken heart.

I tried to not
show that I cared
But that was hard
because you were
always there.

I tried to not fall
in love with you,
and now I'm trying
to not fall apart,
But you've stolen
every piece of my
heart and now
it's dismantled.

I fell for your lies
I believed that
you loved me.

So now, I'm trying to not
fall apart, but it's not easy
when I have a broken heart.

 

Submission date : 2012-03-10
Last edit : 2012-03-10

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Matthew Hall Celtic Warrior ( D ) at 2012-03-13

The rhythm is great and the poem stays on topic. great job, 5/5

Liliana ( F C D ) at 2012-03-13

Very sad, but beuatiful the way you construct words, and the poem it self great job girl :)

Steven Croat ( F C ) at 2012-03-17

Sad and nice poem with great rhymes!

DeviousCharmer ( F P C ) at 2012-03-25

I know how you feel :)

Girl of Conviction ( F P C D ) at 2012-04-04

I'm trying to not
let you see
how much
you mean to me.

I tried to not
let you in,
but somehow
you just win
<<favorite part

its hard to hide your true feelings sometimes :/

you described your emotions beautifully :]

i loved it :]]

5/5



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