Widow's Dream

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 22, 2014


Dreaming of him
is more heavenly
than the tranquil sound
of singing angels.

An eternity of love
appears within my mind,
as the cold winter snow
melts his distant voice
inside my widowed heart.

And his soul
as white as heaven,
will forever visit me
through the gathering
of magical colours
that light up
a stormy sky.

Saffie
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11/10/14

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    This poem sets the tone early with it's clear message, this person who is male has passed away. You dream about them often so that tells me they were a lover, friend or family member who was very close to you. Nothing can bring them back, that is true, but when you dream of him they are there for a while and you recapture the memories for a few seconds, and that tells me you will never forget him. The angels always sing and he has become one of them.

    Love is really eternal and nothing can truly take you away from a person, even death because if you keep them in your heart, are they really dead? Yes, physically they are but not in spirit. His voice is becoming distant which also happens a lot sadly. I love this ending, it holds beautiful imagery and it was painted so well, could you be talking about a rainbow here? People often think about one thing and tie it to a memory, just like rainbows for you. Well done! 5/5