Almost Believable

by Baby Rainbow   Oct 29, 2014


A life without romance
was almost believable
until you swooped me up
inside your dragon wings
and showed me a brand
new world.

We flew across the lands
and travelled afar,
your fiery breath
burning every obstacle
that dared to be in our way.

You built us a castle
with gates that protected
my heart - which finally
felt a love worth living for.

And in the blink of an eye
this dream became a lie
when you took your final breath.

A life without romance
is now believable.

Saffie
23

18/10/14

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  • 9 years ago

    by Zabadak

    Beautiful imagery, Saff!

    Well constructed, and easy to empathise with!

    Devastating content! I know you still hurt! Wish you could heal and move on, still remembering this special time and person!

  • 9 years ago

    by gumshuda

    This is such a beautiful poem saffie... I'm loving it...

  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    Oh saffie, your poems have been so sad lately, I am so sorry for your loss. This person seemed to be your one true love. He was your protector of your heart. And kept you safe from any harm that this world could have cost you. A dragon is also a nice comparison. That tells me he was fearless and before he passed away would protect you at all costs. Now you feel like you will never be able to move on from him. Thank you for sharing. 5/5