Why even bother naming this poem if nobody will read it?

by arsalan   Nov 14, 2014


Broken and worthless,
hear my cries!
for you're the only one.
I've been in pain for so many years that I lost count.
the devil's laughing at my pain.
while the sun is shining high.
while he's burning me after all the years that have gone by.
I don't know why, but after all, something is still pushing me.
but where to go when every place is killing me.
my life was full of success.
but all of that for nothing,
because at the end of my smiles,
I'm slowly dying.
(this poem is not finished, this is only a part of it, although feel free to send me suggestions or eve if you're interested in co-writing it with me.
send me PMs if interested)

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  • 9 years ago

    by John Doe

    I liked this poem, really outspoken, you should some forms of poetry though,they'll help you refine!

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    "did you really take that seriously?"

    nop, but my reply could also be of one depressed reading the poem.

    • 9 years ago

      by arsalan

      -_-
      I see what you did there.

  • 9 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Seems like I am nobody. Why bother naming the poem? Right?

    • 9 years ago

      by arsalan

      ...no...just...ugh, im not...no.
      did you really take that seriously?
      its a poem about depression, so the title should be depressing too.

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