Suicide

by Stephanie and Laura   Nov 17, 2014


The morning

The happiness
The smiles
The love
No more drugs

The afternoon
The hugs
The memories
The promises
No more drugs

The evening
The shopping
The memories
The Love
No more drugs

The Last Night
The Last hugs.
The last promises
The last smile
The last wave
The last goodnight.

The mourning.

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  • 9 years ago

    by WW

    I liked the originality and use of repetition. I felt like going back and touching up its use of capitalization would add to the visual aesthetic of the poem, also it could be given more power if it had descriptions in the concepts. Overall a good read that makes you go over it a few times to piece it together.

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