Every single day maa...

by Meena Krish   Nov 26, 2014


Colorless mood and vague clouds
an emptiness rings loud,
on a swing of loneliness I sway
as thoughts of you floods today,

The world breathes in shades of gray
while nature's solemn music plays,
once a memorable occasion now slays
as I collapse into a stormy bed today,

Tribute of loving tears quietly pays
upon tender moments it softly lays,
your presence which stood tall and proud
now lost in memories' crowd,

I wish you were still here for me to say
kiss, hug and wish Happy Birthday,
I wish to see you not just for today
but

every

single

day...

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Meena pulls the heartstrings again this week by showing the pain that comes when remembering a beloved mother, and wishing time would allow you to be together one more day. The wording in this poem is incredibly touching, and I feel many people will be moved by these words, especially those who have been through such an emotional loss. Truly gripping write.

  • 9 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisitely Written Meena. Congrats On your Win.

  • 9 years ago

    by GB

    Smooth rhyme and well chosen vocabularies. The sadness of the poem couldn't hide its beauty. Write on~

  • 9 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    Beautiful work Meena ! :-)

    Cheers,
    Ray

  • 9 years ago

    by yogi73

    Very touching,Meena. I always love reading your poems. I love the build up in this poem and the present emotions. the end is sad and leaves me lingering and wanting to see someone i miss.

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