The Monster of Depression (Brevette)

by GB   Jul 24, 2015


The Monster of Depression

Sorrow
e n g u l f i n g
life.

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**The Brevette, created by Emily Romano consists of a subject (noun), verb, and object (noun), in this exact order. The verb should show an ongoing action. This is done by spacing out the letters in the verb. There are only 3 words in the poem, giving it the title Brevette.

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I think this is a clever effort - I always admire poets who tackle the shorter forms - I often struggle with those!

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Thnaks Ben. I like the short forms too, great exercise for the brain.

  • 8 years ago

    by Hellon

    In my opinion...this is too short to be considered as a poem...thought provoking as it as so...I'm wondering (not familiar with this form so thank you for bringing it to light) are you allowed to expand on it, as in a string sentry for example? I just think the thought has to go deeper...hope you understand what I mean?

    • 8 years ago

      by GB

      Hmmm I think you are right there, I searched for more information about it but couldn't find more than this. Searching for a subject in of itself is challenging.

      At least this is something shorter than any poem to get bored of hahaha... Thank you for your review.

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