Her

by Bree Ziet   Jan 29, 2016


No heart
No soul
Her thoughts
Black as coal

She didn't know it
She didn't care
She was herself
No matter where.

She may have been sick
But she was mine
I hurt her
She turned bad over time

I'm sorry
Please answer
I didn't know
About your cancer

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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Bree and welcome to the site.

    This is a strong first write from you that really rocks the reader at the last line; it packs a real emotional punch.
    It has a nice rhyme and the short, jagged lines add to the dark feel of the piece.
    Well done and keep writing,
    Ben