Intangible

by Mahal Ko Kuya Ko   Aug 13, 2016


Reveries are too sad to hide beneath your skies,
melancholies are too fragile to hear your cries,
amidst ephemeral hopes and wisteria vines,
here I am again reaping sorrowed storylines.

Alleyways, how lonely they are,
ethereal, you just seem so far.

    report violation
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  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),

    It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.

    from the Philippines,

    Geegoldrodriguez

  • 7 years ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hello Kabayan (mahal ko kuya ko),

    It's very challenging to put everything,all the feelings you want to say in a short yet profound composition.. you are really a genius.

    from the Philippines,

    Geegoldrodriguez

  • 7 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hello,

    great descriptive work here. The feeling of wistfulness is evident in this atmospheric piece.

    Well done and take care,

    Michael

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Mahal, as Hellon and Sir L have stated this piece is unique compared to what you're used to writing and as a reader of your work it's very intriguing as to why this is such a sombre piece.

    All the best, Em

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A lovely flow to this poem that really does pull at the heart strings.
    As Hellon alludes to, this is a different write compared to what I have read of your work previously, but it is excellent nonetheless.

    SL

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