Jealous Love~

by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи   May 3, 2005


Another sad story
Of love death and hate
The reality of
A terrible fate
Where jealousy takes over
And rage settles in
This battle of madness
Lets nobody win
Your heart will be saddened
As you hear in this rhyme
The growing passion
Of a horrible crime
There once was a family
That lived a normal life
A cute little boy
A man and his wife
The wife was unhappy
And loved another guy
And every night while she saw him
Her husband would cry
She filed for divorce
And moved far away
"You Know I still love you"
Is all he did say
She took their son with her
To live with that guy
The poor little boy
For daddy would cry
His daddy was angry
His anger grew all the time
This led to madness
And then came his crime
It was a cold dreary night
The new family parked their car
Hiding in the bushes
Not very far
The jealous husband watched
As the doors unlocked
At what happened next
You may be shocked
He ran up to the car
Yanked open the drivers door
Grabbed the man who replaced him
And knocked him to all fours
From under his coat
Pulled out a gun
Shot him dead
The first job done
Next was his wife
Too scared to scream
While unbuckling her son
She hoped it was a dream
He aimed the gun again
Pointed to her head
Shot her twice
And she too was dead
One last time he raised the gun
His son began to cry
Pulled the trigger sadly
The boy watched his daddy die
Two murders and a suicide
Took place that dreadful night
A little boy left all alone
And no one else in sight

Based on a true story....unfortunately...happened down the street from me a long time ago
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  • 15 years ago

    by Amy

    Nothing like this should ever have to actually happen. I prefer to leave the horrible and magical things in books songs and poems...

    It was a wonderful poems however, I'm sad that it's true.

  • 16 years ago

    by killcupidxoxo

    Wow ur really talented, this is a great poem and is very believable. the flow and rythm was good 2. keep writing

  • 16 years ago

    by jessica warrick

    You are amazing..your goin on my favs

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    Wow. Amazing. And it hurts just more to know that the little boy was left all alone. Great write! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by claudia

    Damn itz sad to know this is true but itz good u r writing bout it good job!