Bottomless pit

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 13, 2005


A bottomless pit of sorrow
a bottomless pit of hate
a bottomless pit of despair
this is my only fate

my soul is nothing but a bottomless pit
my heart turned cold and black
and theres nothing you can do to change it
nothing you can do to take it back

to take back all the pain you've caused me
to take back the tears Ive cried
to take back the bottomless pit you've made
nothing can take back all your lies.

a bottomless pit of sorrow
a bottomless pit of hate
a bottomless pit of despair
because of you this is my fate

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    That's so sad and deep! I know the feeling! Another amazing poem! 5/5 Take Care~! Brooke

  • 18 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    woah...I'm sure you already hear this a lot...but you are really talented! This was a great poem keep up the good work another 5/5 MuchLove~unseentears

  • 18 years ago

    by miss scooby

    WOW...that was DEEP...and your profile was really intresting...you've been through a lot. I enjoyed the poem and respect your ability to be a great writer...
    take care always 5/5
    ♥(v)Χ§.§ÇÕÕ(3¥¹º¹ ♥

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