Take a bow

by LostHopesCrimsonTears   May 23, 2005


I'm lookin' at your picture
and all that i can think
is even though i know your not
you look so young and sweet

i cant stand it anymore
this deception should be a crime
well I'm not gonna let it fool me again
not again, no, not this time

your beautiful smile
your young brown eyes
all these thing
i greatly despise

for even with all this beauty
throughout you and within
from me it still cannot hide
it cannot hide your sin

you seem so sweet and Innocent
but i know better now
your performance was a great one
so go ahead and take a bow

that sweet and Innocent smile
i never would have thought
would be something i would learn to despise
because it tore apart my heart

you had me fooled, i never knew
until it was too late
so go ahead and take a bow
as you walk straight through hells gate

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

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  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    I can really relate to this poem. I thought the rhyming was excellent and it flowed wonderfully, although it was very sad, I still loved it. Great Job ♥

  • 18 years ago

    by t i f f a n y ♥

    your beautiful smile
    your young brown eyes
    all these thing
    i greatly despise

    I love that part. And this part too

    your performance was a great one
    so go ahead and take a bow

    Wow, such a great poem. It is excellent. I love it! I wish I could give it higher then 5!

    Love much,
    Tiff