Submission date : 2005-07-25
Fallen Angel ( F P )
I love this poem, it can be an awesome song... Your really good at writting, if you want you should also check out some of mine... YOU ROCK...
rachel ( F P C )
i love the bit of talking about the girl in the mirror, symboizing that u don't even recognize ur self anymore. wonderful poem i can totally relate,
keep it up!
Silent Dreams Untouched ( F P C D )
This seems more of a song lol. I really liked it. I also like how used the words "the girl in the mirror" as a symbol. It flowed and rhymed pretty good. Well done!
pouringguilt ( F P C D )
Could feel the anguish,liked it.