Don't give up

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..

In this world that surrounds us
We sometimes brake down and fall
Those who stand above us
Can make us seem so small

We tremble under the weight
Of the problems that hold us down
And when we start to collapse
There seems to be no one around

We try to fight in this world
That always seems to fight back
Sometimes we’re not strong enough though
There are too many things we lack

We’ll hide away in corners
Put upon ourselves pain
But there’s no escape from this life
We all must suffer the same

But although we may struggle
And yes we all do fall
I’ll stand by your side
I’ll stay with you through it all

And if you start to tremble
Or even brake down
I’m your shoulder to cry on
I’ll always be around

We all have our faults
Are up and are downs
We cant always smile all the time
Everyone has to frown

No, no ones perfect
And no one is the same
We’re in this world together
We all play the same game

If we stick together
No matter whats to come
With a little faith and hope
Anything can be done

We all get those bad times
Each and every one of us
But I promise it will get better
Just don’t you give up

But when you feel like you want too
Please just remember this
You can die at any time
But it takes a strong person to live


This poem is dedicated to you all. For we all suffer sometimes in our lives. Some of us suffer loss, others from the feeling of being different, there are so many things that bring us down. Some sit in their rooms and just cry and pray for a better life, some of us can’t handle things and reach for the knife. Whatever makes you depressed, no matter how down you feel, how close to giving up you get, don’t!!!
Hold on, be strong, there is always someone out there who cares for you. Life has it’s up and downs, and one day, it’ll look up for you too
If you need someone turn too, i'm here, for anyone who needs me
xoxox

 

Submission date : 2005-08-23

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Lil Luce ( F P C D ) at 2005-09-04

Excellent...words arent enuf to tell u how good this poem is! well done !
take care and keep fighting
xxxLoUxxx

sweetcheeks17 ( F C ) at 2005-10-07

*even the people who never frown eventually breakdown* - L.P

i fu(ken love this poem !! u have talent!!!

::Empty Inside:: ( F P C ) at 2005-12-04

I really loved this poem..its somthin I really needed to hear..well thank you..this poem was really great..I wish I was as talented as you....

xoxo ::Empty Inside::

Sara at 2007-01-01

Hey,
I just wanted to say... thanks for the hope. I just broke up with my boyfriend... literally a few minutes ago and Im not feeling too hot. Im going to call someone though, it will be okay.
*Sara

Paula at 2007-12-15

Wow. I wish I had read that last year, you tell a truth in that poem that I needed to be enlightened to a long time ago, instead of months of suffering. Good job, its an amazing poem, I can already think of someone I'm going to make read it.
-Paula



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