My Fault (Kyrielle)

by Falling Up   Oct 19, 2005


You see perfection in all my flaws
Yet you dont see, you are the cause
Trying to hide them is like an addiction
I bear the pain of my own Affliction

You think my natural beauty is hidden,
To bring out the truth, & whats real ...forbidden
For me, its hard, a contradiction,
I bear the pain of my own affliction

You cant see something Ive masked so well
So many dark secrets, which Ill never tell.
Anything but Perfection, is my depiction
I bear the pain of my own affliction

You see perfection in all my flaws
I bear the pain of my own affliction

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  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo Nikki oOo•♥©

    The Word Affliction Was Used Too Many Times In This Poem, It Was a Great Word In This Poem With Alot Of Meaning, Be Careful Not To Abuse Keywords In a Poem Sometimes, It Makes It a Bit, Predictable And Common....But Overall I Liked It xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Upon my second read through this line really spekls to me "I bare the pain of my own affliction ". Kinda makes you think. Excellent...

  • 18 years ago

    by Z

    Good work as usual. :

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gr8 poem! keep up the gr8 work! that fits me well...im amazed that u can use such large words to rhyme. That's cool! can u mayb chek out sum of my stuff??
    ~Who Cares?~

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