Secrets Never Die

by Anthony

Rain drops hold the secrets,
Then splatter to the ground.
The Secrets soak inside,
Where they're not disturbed or found.

The hurtful words of others,
Are held inside the rain.
It's their secret though,
Because those words mask their pain.

The ground is a safe haven,
For these abandoned mysteries.
And still the world fails to notice,
Like waking past the blowing trees.

These people hide with passion,
Like they'd die if it was free.
But secrets will consume,
They won't know which them to be.

But the rain hold some salvation,
Holds the proverbial aid.
And It masks all our secrets,
All the mistakes we have made.

Everyone has a secret,
That they hope goes down the drain.
But secrets never go away,
They just hide until it rains.

 

Submission date : 2006-01-17

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Lin ( F P C ) at 2006-01-18

You know, people have always told me.. you have a great gift with words, but when i read other peoples dtuff, i just wish i could explain my self, period. i dont think i have "a gift" at all, i like this a lot, the words are... awsome. i dont know, just one of those days?! great tho i love it!
Love, Lin

◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D ) at 2006-01-21

Wow, this topic....I don't think I've ever read one like it. I am so pleased right now.

I'm not even saying this cause you're my friend.....this is just amazing.

There are some parts hwre I think you can word it better, but the ending is superb.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

◊ Atomic ◊ ( F C D ) at 2006-01-21

Where*

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Angela ( F P C D ) at 2006-01-25

OMG OMG OMG...... Anthony this is, WOW, I'm speechless........ I just love it........ WOW....... OMG....... ummmmm, yea....... speechless!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

alyssa ( F ) at 2006-02-11

You have such talent, and every word of this poem is true. Amazing.



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