Goodbye

by Jennifer   May 9, 2006


As you read this note
I hope you cry
Cuz I tried
To show you
That I was through
Trying to impress
I'm so stressed
I press
The knife to my wrist
Sh*t
This hurts like a b**ch
I wonder will you ponder
Why I done this
Sh*t
It's you
To much sh*t to go through
I hope this shows you
Be easier on the other two
Or they'll end up like me
Can't you see
With two slit wrist
When you think I'm taken a sh*t
I'm getting dizzy
I love you sissy
This wasn't you, so remember I love you
I really do
Now are you sad
I hope so dad
I hope..you...cry
G..o...o....d.....b.....y......e

**** I wrote this a couple of months ago and decided to post it, so it would mean so much to me if u comment on it and rate it...I always return the favor.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Meggie33

    That was amazing, once again though, (this is the 2nd one) i didnt see it coming that it was going to be about your dad, it was a very good poem, it had extreme meaning. Too somebody with a very hateful relationship with their parents, a poem like that could be very touching. You aren't alone, lots of people go through sh*t, just try to stick in there... u know i luv ya! haha... good job!
    **meggie**

  • 17 years ago

    by Sondos

    Suicide is cowardice-i tell myself this every day so now i'm telling you

    About the poem-packed with a emotion
    V.good

    Sondos

  • 17 years ago

    by Jen

    Your very good at expressing your feelings in writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Why I done this (I think done should be did.)

    It was filled with emotion, you seem like you write from your heart. I love this one. Great job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Awwww...its kinda sad..but its really good,shows what you were feeling at the time