To My Loving Heart

by I will love you Forever and not a day less   Mar 23, 2007


I'm tired,
tired of this heart ache,
I feel like I'm about to break,
I wish I could make,
make the pain go away,
You always say,
Everything well be OK,
Maybe for you,
But not for me,
I feel so blue,
I wish I could undo,
The pain,
The pain I feel,
I wish it was not real,
Can it please be filled,
You may think it don't bother me,
But it does,
It cut's right to the bone,
And driver's deep down within my soul,
Where I wish it would never go,
So this is to my loving heart,
To my loving heart that is falling apart............

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  • 16 years ago

    by SweetDreamz

    This is amazing. Very good flow and I love this line: 'It cut's right to the bone,'
    too tru. well done:P...again! hehe

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Very nice and sentimental.

  • 16 years ago

    by Bloodstained

    I really like this poem, very well written.

  • 16 years ago

    by Manda J

    Wow; Amazing. You deffinalty capture all the feelings that go into a broken heart.
    Very Good.
    Hope to read more.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittney

    Oh wow i really like this poem.
    def. 5/5
    Keep it up.

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