Life sucks,
Its not fair,
When you can hardly bare,
The pain that you feel,
You always wish it was not real,
Then again some people would always,
rather feel,
feel pain than nothing at all,
But I saw,
And then I fall-ed,
fall-ed to deep,
to deep,
to where it hurts,
hurts so bad,
That I feel so sad,
How can I be glad,
When I'm so sad,
I guess I'm losing,
losing my touch,
and thats just to much,
to much cuz I love ya a bunch,
But it hurts,
and you know why,
I wish I was as far as the sky,
So I can fly,
and be me,
Not the hurting me,
Just be me,
The loving Me..............
I can totally relate to this..because i feel the same right now..
the way you wrote this poem really displays the emotion you're trying to get across..i like it a lot =]
