Crashing down

by I will love you Forever and not a day less   Apr 1, 2007


My life is crashing down,
all the way to the ground,
I wish I could stop it,
but its all ready there,
but no one seems to care,
so I move on though my days,
telling everyone I'm OK,
but then if, if you really cared,
then u could look me in the eyes,
and see........see how i feel,
you could see this face,
not so happy to be here,
and you could see my eyes,
My eyes,
going into tears................

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie smiles

    This 1's sad. i hate feeling like that. it's really GOOD! xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    All your poems are superb and this one is I like the most, simple and very expressive.It's a very different approach from your other poems to the reader. It's very unique. Again,good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Erin

    I really like this poem...your really good at writing them also....thanks for your comment on my poem....good job...loved it!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awww, its sad you feel this way but its a good poemxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Viola

    I've felt like this before..ang oh you really need somebody to care at those times..i love this poem
    good work..and i hope everything is better now <3 =]

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