Submission date : 2007-04-20
Last edit : 2007-11-26
Marian ( F P C D )
Excellent poem, as always, m'dear. I adored how it flowed rather effortlessly in my tongue. How did you two do it? I'm having an occupational jealousy over that... Lol, just kidding! (^^,) Back to the poem, the theme was presented well and the progression was amazingly done. An outstanding piece, nonetheless. I loved it! Well done, both of you! =]
Sydney ( F C D )
Bravo. This piece is excellent. It really gave me a picture in my mind and it really kept my attention. Your choice of words were flawless and brilliant as well. Really nice job : )
Fsams ( F P C D )
Great collaboration, two talents combined and put in one piece, what to say except it is flawless in all the sense :)
DarkSpirit ( F C D )
It is very interesting. You put a lot of emotions in this piece, but I don't like the last line, it doesn't fit and it destroys the flow, but the rest of this poem is great. You described battle of and for life on very good way, I also like the rhythm of this piece it is very powerful. Well done! This one deserves 5/5
NyellMoonlight ( F P C D )
Powerful... that's the only word that's coming to the mind at the moment...
Great piece, you two did equally good job on this. I like the topic, it is very interesting and original.