by ADORKable x3
Submission date : 2007-04-27
Last edit : 2007-04-28
nuvia rios ( C )
Im reading at the same time telling myslef this is what i need to be doing......moving on.......thanx for the read it helped me in a way
*Charisma* ( F P C D )
Good ending. the whole poem was very good with flow and rhyme. i enjoy poetry like that. So as always, I look forward to more from you. One of my favs!!!!
<3SoSickOfTears<3 ( F P C D )
This was so beautifully written.
I loved the repetition and I thought the ending had great impact.
Wings Of Flames ( F P C D )
Thsas a really really good piece.
my favourite was the ending
its such a sad love world.
you capturted it perfectly
Twisted Heart ( F P C D )
Just a quick note. I read this in one of the contests and had to comment. This is wonderful. The flow was excellent and the message was strong. I was reading along thinking to myself how strong and secure you sounded. It was like you had finally gotten over the heartache and was pushing ahead.... then I read that last stanza, and I thought... How sad, but true. It's hard to recover from a broken heart.
You did an exceptional job on this. Good stuff.