No love left

by paul alexander   Jun 11, 2007


I have no love left
its all gone
my heart is worthless
it doesn't belong
my eyes hurt
from all the crying
i feel so useless
i feel like I'm dieing
god please help me out
I'm letting it out
no longer holding it in
hear me shout
clean me from my sins
god do you hear me
i think not
its all over for me now
goodbye im gone

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  • 16 years ago

    by Neta

    I love this poem i can totally relate to it
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...It's missing something more pointed and vivid. Certainly there's emotion but it's almost cliche. It does have something intense near the end but lacks something. Sorry...that wasn't very helpful. I'm wowed by the emotional aspect but not enthused with the content. Okay but not great except with the emotion.
    ~Faith-less

  • 16 years ago

    by NinjaGirl

    Good poem 5/5 keep writing

    ~NinjaGirl~

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