Venting. Take:2

by Crystal Gaze   Aug 28, 2007


Have you ever felt like you just wanted to break down and cry?
Freeze everything, and just float into the sky.
I feel like stopping time, ending my life, and just decaying into the ground.
I fear the what ifs, the screams, the outcome.
And all I want to do, is Stop it. Stop everything!

Freeze the breath of life before it passes threw my lips and into my lungs,
Freeze the time, before it passes me bye, and brings too soon the future,
Freeze Everything! and just let me cry myself too death!

And then.. Then you can,
Take me too a place, where I no longer cry.
Cradle me within your arm's, and shelter me from all harm.
Kiss a dream within me, so I live on in a fantasy.

You can Save Me...
Just Rid me of this Pain!
Of the Fear,
and confusion.
Just take me away, take me faraway,
just get me away before I turn too self harm..

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  • This had a couple of grammatical errors, but it's good. Except, there's not really a connection to the other one. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • This had a couple of grammatical errors, but it's good. Except, there's not really a connection to the other one. 4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 16 years ago

    by firexdancer

    Wow, it was good, the flow wasn't completely smooth but i loved this line 'kiss a dream within me, so i live on in a fantasy' that was my favorite part of the whole poem, it had alot of emotion and strength in it as well, very beautiful but as i said earlier the flow was a little bit off so you might just want to go over it cause it feels sorta raw.
    5/5
    luv, gabriella