From Pain, To Love, To Sorrow...

by KeyxMashingxParody   Aug 31, 2007


Of all the days I've waited,
And cried so many tears.
No one has ever rescued me,
From all my pain and fears.

You picked me up when I had fallen,
Lifted me high above all.
You kept me close from heart ache,
You said you'd never let me fall.

I believed those words you spoke gently,
And fell deep into a confusing dream.
Your voice echoed in my body,
Those whispers turned to screams.

I slowly felt the pain haunting me again,
And the sorrow was more then torture.
I lost grip on everything I ever had,
And fell from what my heart worked for.

I curled up in a corner tonight,
And cried so many tears.
Tears I thought I had lost,
Through out those many years.

Happiness had me fooled,
Blinding me from the facts.
Love is a stone cold lie,
And hurts when it attacks.

Love is an evil thing,
Torturing all that crosses it's path.
And if you let your guard down,
You will feel it's wrath.

Pain and sorrow are thought to be bad,
But it has always been the other way around.
Pain and sorrow helped me move on,
But love kept me pinned to the ground.

Defenseless and hopeless,
I was left to rot in shame.
But love didn't make me who I am,
That was only the pain.

-Liz-

(Please DO NOT vote based on if you have the same beliefs as me, these are only my feelings, not all feelings in general. I only warn you. Thank you.)

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  • 16 years ago

    by 4 track demo

    I enjoyed this...it worked for me, you get a great big HELL YEAH... the only negative thing is the disclaimer thing at the end it kinda scared me...

  • 16 years ago

    by Somber Esprit

    Interesting poem. it was well written at the beginning, with nice flow, but i found myself losing interest about 2/3 of the way through. the rhythem seemed a little off... other than that, it was really well done! food for thought!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    Great job. I loved it. The flow was great and you used punctuations and everything. I miss that sometimes when i read poems without. It shows you spent time on it. I definitely felt the emotion and I liked the concept of love being the evil entity while pain and sorrow were like the protagonists in your life. Good Job and keep it up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Ewww... enticing and thought provoking. I have never looked at it that way and yet it all makes perfect sense.

    I really love this and all the thought s that you put into it. I could actually see myself in that corner with you; trying to comfort you as I cried my heart out also.

    I just cannot get over how amazing this piece is and how it shot right through me. It is almost as though I am left on the floor right now.

    Just simply brilliant and wonderful. Thank you for writing this.

    --Sher