Faith

by Xx Alone in my Quandary xX   Sep 1, 2007


"faith" is trust or a complete confidence? Which one have on other's? does this word really exist or is just a prank? While thinking of this a tear fell down through her eyes, floating all the way through her cheek¦ mum's little doll have nothing to write about, except to show her tender guiding heart with the broken pieces; placed gracefully on her lap, still she is breathing; so peacefully, though about to die; still she is so intimate with her writing? does any one know why she write? Why she feels like no one else? Why she seems so courageous while vulnerable within as well. Is this because she left her home in secrecy, while crying with the silent and hushed tears she cried through her heart? Moving on.. while keeping a little secret with her, she don't have anything to remorse about, even for the decisions she had made, why she is like this? So unusual? But reluctant! To do what she is suppose to? Just tend to reminiscent about the past she had;and eventually the last breath she took, and with it she closed her eyes; and took the last breath, she left this world: Her hand with the blood stained knife.. she is gone.. no where any one could see her again.. she had the silent but suicidal death due to having blind faith on others...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    Awwwwwww. really very touching meaning of your words written. i cannot say this is a poem. but its like something.. i loved the ending it was sad ending. and yes . faith is so important in any relation. aswell. try to converts your feelings and emotions in the form of poem.. i am sure you can do it.. just try next time

  • 16 years ago

    by DarknessInMySoul

    Fantastic! I loved it. It explains the truth that people don't see today, and describes what I think and feel. People cant see the truth, and when they do, its torture, and they want to end it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    This poem is fantastic!! keep it up!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Ali Khan

    I really loved ur poem....it has brought tears to my eyes...u knw i had these thoughts all which u have written in this poem i wanted to blurt out all these... like but i did'nt have tht talent which u have...and when i read ur poem it seemed very much familiar cuz tht wht i think all day i can relate it with ma life...i appreciate ur work..keep writing...

  • 16 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done! ;)