Forget

by Beyond Repair   Sep 9, 2007


Never forget my name, I want to burn it into you soul
I want to read it in your veins, I want you to ache at the sight
Of everything and anything cause it reminds you of me
I want to burn me into your eyes so I'm all that you see

I want every part of your brain to be soak in my memory
I want your every thought to first begin with me
I want every other word out of your god damn mouth
Have something to do with me and not what your talking about

Forget everything you ever knew
Forget everything you once held true
Forget everything that meant something to you
And fill your every tissue every fiber with my being
I want you to know what I am feeling

This may be a shock to your senses
But this is what I have to put up with
This is a taste of what you put me through
All the things you have no idea that you do

I wish you knew half, of the spells that you cast
Every shadow has your shape
Every food has your taste
You are my everything and there's no escape
I just wish you could share the same fate

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  • 16 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Eek, Your ending was..Eek.
    I love the last stanza, A lot.

    "I wish you knew half, of the spells that you cast
    Every shadow has your shape
    Every food has your taste
    You are my everything and there's no escape
    I just wish you could share the same fate"

    I go through every poem, Trying to pick out things I can offer advice on, Things I think can be improved. But when I got to your ending, I forget them all.

    Such a strong conclusion should have a strong poem above it.
    You seem to be venting, Now turn your vent into poetry.
    Work on the flow, and arrangement of your words.
    This has a lot of potential. :]

    I love the emotion and anger in it.

    Good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    I often want to forget things... this poem was magnificant!no lie 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, this is deep stuff, it flows so well and it's very honest
    it's like you've said all the things that i have been keeping inside
    really really good stuff
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww so sad, Through poem I kept thinking it's not a sad poem, but the last line just said everything. Very deep poem. Wording was amazing for me and flowed perfectly!
    5/5 Keep up!

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