IM just not sure anymore

by John

I don't know this feeling i cant describe it its not love its not hate its not rage and not fate. I relay don't know what to do I'm not even thinking about you. My mind is clear i sence no daze i try to find the slightest haze. I'm so confused I'm doing fine but i don't know this feeling of mine. I really don't know what to say I'm count down the hours of day. I'm not that bored I'm not even high. So why the hell do i feel like a lie. I'm almost done now Ive tried to describe of this oddly sensation feeling inside. Ill try it now to say at last my attention here is fading fast. The words to say has finally came the feeling that i have is .... Shame....

 

Submission date : 2007-10-12

Visits : 1938
Votes : 1
Rating : 5.0

Rate and comment this poem


If you'd like to comment/rate this poem or you want to publish your own poetry on "Poems & Quotes", sign-up here!

Latest comments

CEE CEE ( P C D ) at 2007-10-13

I like your poem i had to read it like 3 times (IM SLOW <<J/K) i just was on the phone and reading at the same time but i loved the way it flowed and its cool to know that when you write about how you feel it really helps you to understand what your going through it helps me too but all in all i loved it kay keep up the good work. 5/5