Divorced Parents

by AnotherAries

Divorced Parents

Divorced parents are the worst parents.
Far apart relationships.
It's hurts a lot To choose between
two people I love.

I shouldn't have to make these kind of decisions.
being too young to understand
why mommy was leaving,

I wish time was controlled.
And if I knew how much I had,
I would have spent every second with her.

These half year plans, I spend y'all
at two separate houses, is Topsy-turvy.

Flying from state to state makes me sick.
I'm another child In another system.
With many other kids,who cry almost every night.

I don't understand what went wrong.
Why would you want to saddened me?
Well here I am pleading out for help.
But the more I seem to beg, the least I get.

So I don't quit, I just stop asking,
Maybe wondering, that we'll all walk by
a mirror and see what we've become.

Can we stop thinking about the past,
and look toward the future?

And try to find some good in one another.
I just hope this happens soon
cause, I'm not young forever.

And the time is running by
and ain't stopping for no one!

I want what everyone else want!
Where did we ever go wrong?

 

Submission date : 2008-01-17
Last edit : 2008-01-17

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Emmanuel Datu ( F P C ) at 2008-02-06

That was good. It didnt really have a sad tone to it which was one of the reasons i liked it. That mirror line was ill. 5/5.

Emmanuel Datu ( F P C ) at 2008-02-06

That was good. It didnt really have a sad tone to it which was one of the reasons i liked it. That mirror line was ill. 5/5.

Shaikha BuAli at 2008-02-16

Life can be like that! my parents come from two completly diffeent worlds... my mom from the states and my dad from the middle east! and the love in their relationship ended soon after i was born! so i know exactly what its like! espically when u feel like its you! and dont understand! if you ever need to talk pm me! great emotions in your poem :)

Robert ( F P C D ) at 2008-02-21

I liked this pies the message was very cleaar and you made the reader see the delemma through your eyes great job

Live WeLL ( F P C D ) at 2008-03-26

Wow this poem is great! and unfortunately a lot of people can relate to this... a child going thru his/her parents' divorce is a very hard thing to do and you really expressed your emotions well in this poem..

And try to find some good in one another.
I just hope this happens soon
cause, I'm not young forever.

I really like those few lines.. they send out a really good message and you are right.. we are not young forever.. as much as we wish we were..

You did a great job with this poem and you did a great job letting the reader know your feelings. Nice job. 5/5 =) and thanks for the comment!



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