Comments

Cindy ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-12

Karla
Great job on this. I don't think I know enough slang to ever write a poem using it. Very heartfelt.
Take care
Love Cindy

Quiet Insanity ( F C D ) at 2009-10-12

You are such an intense poet. From the inner core of emotions you pen the perfect poem of heartache, pain and despair.
Fantastic girl

Sylvia A ( F P C D ) at 2009-10-13

Very intense and I am like Cindy, I could never learn enough slang to write a sentence much less a poem. Good job.