omg great poem.. u put so much work and emotion into your pieces well done. please if u cud check out my newest poem "help me" wud mean alot if u told me wat u thought mwAzz thanks Stephy :):)

Alot of good feeling about this poem Brittany, Yes that is a problem to you question, just teasing. What was that about is that a problem? This poem was lovely read yet again, bring on more can't wait.

nicely written

Splendid job!

Warmest regards,

Steve

Thanks 4 reading and commenting on my poems. this poem is deep and sensual. nice job. keep it up

A real keeper.