Comments : Sleeping in the rain

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Okay... I really like what you have to say, but the way you didn't write out all the words and typos were really distracting to me. So I would suggest a more professional look...write out all the words and check over your work...

    "ad i dont know wat 2 do
    as i watch the rain fall"

    *and (I don't know what to do)

    I'm also sorry if you feel this way... I can relate.... Keep writing hon.

    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    Well i liked it and you aint gotta write out shit it's cool just da wat it is that's why it's inder SLANG POEMS!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    *way *under