Sleeping in the rain

by the love of another fills my soul   Oct 21, 2005


As i walk thru the rain all i can hear is my empty soul
so lost inside so confused
ad i dont know wat 2 do
as i watch the rain fall
it reminds me of the blood that keeps dripping
people say theres a god
but if there was, then where is he now?
my tears mix with the rain as it hits the ground. and i think to myself" wat do i do now?"
my wrist aches
theres blood all over the placemy mind is lost
my soul is torn
but i continue 2 walk
b cuz i want 2 die
i want 2 be cold, wet and all alone
so that no one else will have 2 deal wit my pain
i found a nice kool spot over there
under some trees
so i lay down
watching the blood continue 2 flow
and i fall asleep hearing myself weep
and never again will i wish 2 wake up from my sleep in the rain

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    *way *under

  • 18 years ago

    by Tenisha

    Well i liked it and you aint gotta write out shit it's cool just da wat it is that's why it's inder SLANG POEMS!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Okay... I really like what you have to say, but the way you didn't write out all the words and typos were really distracting to me. So I would suggest a more professional look...write out all the words and check over your work...

    "ad i dont know wat 2 do
    as i watch the rain fall"

    *and (I don't know what to do)

    I'm also sorry if you feel this way... I can relate.... Keep writing hon.

    xxxx

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