Backwards Hourglass ( F P C D )
at 2008-11-18
My feet are bare, and the concrete is warm like summer breeze on my soles.
^^ That line made me laugh. The warm concrete...it's so very new mexican in that perspective.
this is gorgeous, olivia. i can't help but feel the undertones of something very, very sad..like a loss. i'm thankful for you, livs...just so you know.
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