Aish ( F P C D )
at 2009-04-06
Absolutely beautiful.
very different. well written-nice flow.
a beautiful piece of writing :)
5/5 aish
Lucas Lorenzo The SpanishMystic ( F C D )
at 2009-04-06
Nicely done, I so like this poem, it reminds me of a pagan song upon bridal and the ceremonies of great events in this illustration.
Athena
at 2009-09-22
You have encorporated excitement and nervous tension as well as painting a beautiful picture that comes with the ceremony.
Great write.
5/5, Athena :)
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