Sylvia ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-14
Powerful words you have used and you are correct in that a mothers love for her child or children is like no other, so strong, no matter what they do. She loves them. Well done.
Timothy r ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-14
A perfectly worded homage to the one who takes care of you, no matter how old you are, this should be written in a mother`s day card. Timothy r
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-14
What a wonderful poem for mothers. Who love unconditionaly, unselfishly, and no matter what are there for us no matter the time of night or day. A mother is always there with her arms open welcoming us home.
Paul anand singh ( F C )
at 2009-05-18
You are correct to every word my friend.No treasure in this world can compare to the love a mother has for her children.
Thanks for sharing this beautiful and heartfelt piece.
An enjoyable read.
Paul...
Kiko ( F C )
at 2009-05-21
This is a very nice tribute to all mothers, everywhere in the world.
Nicely penned!
Rachel ( F P C D )
at 2009-05-27
A beautiful description of the unconditional love a mother has for her children.
There were a couple grammatical errors:
She sacrifices to see her child happy
not once demands anything in return,
for all the things she does each day
we can never pay back but only learn,
as we admire the strength she displays
during those trying times that visits. (visit)
There is no greater love that exists
then the one between mother and child,
in her eyes all of her children are equal
no matter how very naughty or wild,
all the riches in this world is (are)unequal
to a mothers love that is irreplaceable.
The message is so true!
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