T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-26
This is one of those poems that does nothing but leave the reader speechless. The last stanza repeated deep down breaks my heart. I admire you for writing poems like these, they are very nice dedications.. it takes a lot of heart to write about someone so close to your heart although they are gone. *hugs*
Amelia Under Water ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-01
Wow this is a very sentimental poem. it really expresses how your feel :)
Ray Smallshaw ( F P C D )
at 2009-09-02
Love and all its excitement jumped at me a birthday gift? and a birthday smile funny who was the more excited? you or her you held me and I enjoyed Rays Excellent as I have come to expect of your diverse, flowery and refreshing poetry.5/5
Poetess Lana ( D )
at 2009-09-04
I loved the last stanza. This poem has a lot of emotion in it; I almost cried reading it. My favorite line was definitely the last one:
"You're still the one I love"
Overall, it was beautifully written. =)
TorturedMind ( D )
at 2009-09-26
Im curious to why you use the perenthesis....but this one is good....the flow is great....characteristic of you poems....keep it up.
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