Maya ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-31
Well, I certainly did enjoy this one!
The scene you describe is one of so much warmth and togetherness...I really loved it and wished I could have had such a childhood!
*hugs*
5/5 Ingrid
Purple Skittle ( F P C D )
at 2009-08-31
Quiet rain outside
Light the fire place
Mama kisses my head
Her soft hand on my face
*This part was sweet :) I love thanksgiving. I hardly get to see my family because it's so huge but when we get together we have a blast and I think you expressed that really well here. I love the short setences. I think that was a nice touch. This is a really sweet poem and it warms my heart. Great work hun. Nik*
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