Quiet Insanity ( F C D )
at 2009-10-11
Cool poem right in the spirit of Halloween. Good rhyme and flow excellent wording. Nice :D
T e m p s ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-11
I loved this Karla. Had a little humor in it as well. I had to laugh at this line "Be careful if you come across a banshee." - we always call my neighbor a banshee, its a long story. just as a joke of course but that made me giggle. Each halloween poem I read is something fresh and different. Great job.
Cindy ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-11
Wonderful job on this Karla.....the imagery is great. I really enjoyed the read.
Take care
Cindy
Sylvia A ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-12
Karla, you did a good job with the Halloween club challenge. The images are vivid and you told a good story. Well done.
DreamOfOlwin ( F P C D )
at 2009-10-13
A great write :) I really enjoyed reading! Loved the opening lines...
"A black cat unleashes its claws
In the silent wan moon's ray."
Well done on the club challenge!
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