Meena, nice job with the form and wonderful words for your husband to show the love you have for him. Good job.

In this line
each of your word within me stays...

I think word should be words.

Meena, I read this as a prayer that you should say over and over to your Higher Power. Lovely words sharing your experience,strength and hope with the man,husband, soul mate ....
Thanks for sharing

Meena, I read this as a prayer that you should say over and over to your Higher Power. Lovely words sharing your experience,strength and hope with the man,husband, soul mate ....
Thanks for sharing

Wonderful job on the form. I absolutely love it when people try different forms as I see it as a show of their creativity as an poet. You did a wonderful job with this from and I asspecially liked the poem too. It gave me a sense of comfort as I read, or at least that's the feelings I got as I read it. Anyway you did a wonderful job. Good job and keep writing.

Years of struggle seems far away
as moments bring us close
to heart,

WOW...this was a very direct nd potential opening...was realy strong ..

but why not say as moments bring us closer
to the heart ? sounds more rich
but wont change how really gd it is..only a suggestion..u knw better :)

each of your word within me stays...
>>u mean each of your words ?
grows like a thorn less rose
of art.
^^OMG very very poetic..very original iive not heart b4 an expression as beautiful as thorn less rose of ART..of ART ? WELL done!!!

This bond strengthens through pain and strife
recalling our love
and plight forever,
to be man and wife
^^^
nw again how AMAZING MEENa..this bond strengthens..through pan and strife? how TRUE..how DEEP..i love it

prayers I send above
tonight.
....very sweet ending..a really special poem..by a speciaal person!

5/5 definitely