Olwin, another poem that brings to life the images of a Christmas and the winter scene. Made me smile.

This poem conveys a very warm and quaint feeling of Xmas, home life and good cheer culminating at the at the warm serenity and timelessness of the fireplace. Nice vibes here!

Reading this poem brings upon a good warm feeling and the end just made me smile! Its those small little things and animals that make us sigh and look forward to that end of the day rest..enjoyed this read!!

This is awesome I love the feeling this poem sends to us. Great job, love it:)

Awesome Awesome Awesome...Simply Awesome :)

Even reading your poems could bring a smile on face, doesn't matter if I celebrate christmas or not...still could feel the excitement & imagine idol family. Great write friend :)

all the best & take care

Sweetly Written Nice Job!!!

Olwin,
What a beautiful little piece of poetry this is - I could almost hear the little mouse scratching and imagine the warm crackling log fire, which I myself am rather partial to!
You've painted a really lovely and honest picture here of a lovely time of year.
All the very best and take care,
Ben