Comments : Two-thousand and Thirteen

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    I like this....great job Arron :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    I voted for your piece, so congrats on winning in the club challenge! :)

    I love how you added the other eras, it was a nice touch!

  • 11 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I worked in a frozen temperature for my present,
    I got sick for my wintry present.
    I dreamed a dream,
    But that dream is nothing more but a dream....

    dude, this stanza stood out for me. I just loved how you struggled for your present life and now you are living it. This poem is amazing and a remarkable piece too.

  • 11 years ago

    by Skyler

    This is a great symbol for the passing of the new year. A sense of nostalgia for the old, eagerness for the new, and anxiety for both. Good work.

    • 11 years ago

      by Blood of a Lion

      Thanks this is just one of those idea's that hit you once in awhile from your personal life.